1) Curiosity provoking headlines should be avoided. Headline-pulling power can be
created by combining self-interest with curiosity. Curiosity by itself will not do the
job.
2) Your headline should express the main idea clearly. If it takes several words to
express complete idea, don’t use less.
3) Offer something a targeted reader wants badly. Make your offer in simple
language. Capture the attention of your customer’s interests by offering something
they want and need in clear and simple English.
4) Comic-laced, clever headlines should be avoided. Amused readers aren’t
necessarily buying customers.
5) Avoid solemn or negative headlines.
6) Write self-interest into your headlines. Your headline should offer something to the
reader that he wants. Make a promise.
7) Make a headline absolutely believable. Use facts to keep your claims credible; don’t
make subjective claims without backing them up.
8) After writing several or more headlines, select the best one.
9) Don’t let a graphic artist or printer decide which words in your letter should be
emphasized. Graphic artists are more concerned with how something looks, than
how it reads.
10) Get “new” or “improved” news into your headline.
11) When you write your headline, ask yourself what word or group of words will make
readers act.
12) An advertisement must have a headline. People must be given a powerful reason
to read your copy. An ad or sales letter without a headline is like a delivery truck
without a sign. People will know it’s a delivery truck but they won’t know what
they’re selling.
13) Your copy contains useful and valuable information; your headline should say so.
14) If there is a quick and easy way for the reader to get what he wants, your headline
should deliver that message.
15) Avoid headlines that paint the negative side of a picture. Always project the bright
and cheerful angle of your offer.
16) If you emphasize certain words in a headline, be sure they are words that
communicate a benefit or unique value.
17) Look through magazines and other trade publications to discover great ideas.
Focus on headlines that are being run consistently and successfully. Review the
100 greatest headlines of all time, just click here.
18) Use a main benefit to grab the attention of your targeted audience in your headline.
Make sure to learn the difference between a feature and a benefit and write about
benefits.
19) By using large “Bold” type you can better attract the targeted group of people who
will most likely be interested in your offer.
20) Don’t attract the wrong audience with your headline. A simple way to know what
your customers want is to survey your existing customers to see what attracted
them to buy.
21) Avoid writing unclear, “hard-to-understand” headlines. People will generally not
take the time to figure out what it all means.
22) Once your headline is written, get some feedback by showing your headlines to
others. Sometimes they’ll notice something very important you may have
completely missed.
23) Don’t assume people won’t read long copy or headlines. They will as long as you
keep it interesting! The advertising rule of thumb is this: Use short copy to produce
inquiries, and long copy to produce orders. If “inquiries” is the purpose of your ad,
then write short copy. On the other hand, if you want orders, provide all the
information a buyer needs to make a wise buying decision. Give buyers what they
need and want… lots of information-packed details.
24) Even with the greatest headline, you must tell a prospect what to do. Make it easy
for a customer to order. If your ad or sales letter is confusing, you may lose an
order.
By Dan Jeffreys, Creator of “90-Day Affiliate Millionaire”
Source: http://www.90-dayaffiliatemillionaire.com/ebook_downloads/24_Headline_Writing_Rules.pdf
